Thursday, February 4, 2010

narwhal thing part 1-4




Part 1

Panel One: Black. Words: “Midnight” “Davis Strait off the coast of Maniitsoq, Greenland” “November 1984”

Panel Two: Black

Panel Three: Black.

Panel Four: A match is lit in the distance. An outline of a dude standing in a small boat is seen that is floating in the middle of the water.

Panel Five: Close up of hands using the match to light a lantern in the boat. Behind the lantern lying in the boat are guitar and some empty bottles of beer.

Panel Six: The boat is now lit up pretty good. The dude is sitting in his little boat leaning back playing his geetar. Words of a song will be in the panel. Musical notes and the words HEEEEEEEEEEY SWEEEET MAAAAAMA are coming from the dude.

Panel Seven: Dude is now drinking from a bottle.

Panel Eight: Dude leans over the side of the boat and is puking.

Panel Nine: Dude is done puking and he is staring into the ocean saying “What the…”

Panel Ten: Dude stands up and reaches for a spear that I guess was in the boat in the previous panels too.

Panel Eleven: The tiny boat is smashed to bits and dude is diving headfirst into the water with his spear as a majestic narwhal is half-emerged from the water into the air.

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Part 2

Panel One: Lady in a kitchen talking on the phone. She is sitting in a chair next to a fridge and the phone is on the wall like the Simpsons I think. Corner shows that it is January 1985, Seattle, WA. Lady is saying “I haven’t heard from George in four or five months…”

Panel Two: “…the last letter I got from George said that he was leaving Ireland and he was going to make his way to Iceland and Greenland, then cross through Canada to come home.” The picture shows George in a pub writing a letter.

Panel 3: Back to lady sitting in kitchen and voice bubble from phone asking “How is little George taking his dad’s long absence?”

Panel 4: “George has been gone for three years now. I’m not sure little George remembers his dad...” Picture in this panel is a five year old kid sitting in his room smashing a volcano with a tyrannosaurus toy in one hand and a sneaker in the other.

Panel 6: “I think George will be back by the summer” Bang from the door (coming from outside of panel) “Hang on, someone’s at the door”.

Panel 7: Mailman is at the door asking the lady to sign for a package. “I need you to sign for this box. I think it’s from Greenland?” Lady says “OK, sure, thanks”

Panel 8: A close up of the box and the return address. Return address reads Nuuk Police Department Nuuk, Greenland

Panel 9: Lady is standing in her doorway opening the box.

Panel 10: Lady is reading the letter from the police department. The part that is in the panel reads: Dear Mrs. Bentos. We are sorry to inform you that your husband has been involved in a boating accident. His boat appears to have fallen victim to the attack of the narwhal. Your husband’s body has not been found, but due to the location of the boat at its discovery we are not confident in the possibility of survival. Enclosed in this box are the possessions found in the boat…

Panel 11: A close up of the box dropped on the ground with a hat and a letter addressed to “My Dear Annette” (the rest of the address is illegible) There is a voice bubble coming from above which is basically Mrs. Bentos screaming. AAAAHHHHHHHHHH or EEEEEEEEEEE or something. Yeah maybe EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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Part 3

Panel 1: September 1984. Reykjavík, Iceland. George is scribbling away at a desk in a hotel room.

Panel 2: Close up of writing on a piece of paper. “My dear Annette, I just arrived in Iceland because I have heard that you were here not too long ago…

Panel 3: Close up of George’s face. He’s tired looking and he has a bloody nose. Not sure why he has a bloody nose at this point. Writing continues “I’ve almost travelled halfway across the world trying to find you and I am not ready to give up…”

Panel 4: Picture of George playing a didgeridoo in the Outback with one aboriginal. “In Australia they said you were heading to China”

Panel 5: George meditating on the Great Wall of China “…where they said you were heading to Russia…”

Panel 6: George playing chess in a park with some Russian dude and the Soviet flag is flapping somewhere. “…where clues began to point to Greenland”.

Panel 7: George is in the hotel bathroom looking in the mirror tending to his bloody nose. “I am not sure why you left like that. I told you I was going to handle everything, but I guess you were just being impatient.”

Panel 8: George is sitting in bed reaching for the light “I am sure I’ll find you in Greenland, but if not I’m going to give up”

Panel 9: Black panel. Words: “I hope your parents have been saving these letters.”

Panel 10: A beat up shack looking place with a mailbox overflowing with letters out front. The location as told in the panel is Laramie, Wyoming

Panel 11: A picture of a narwhal’s tusk protruding from the water. The text continues “I’ll see you soon -George”

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Part 4

Panel 1. Seattle, Washington January 1985. Little George is climbing the bus steps with tyrannosaurus in his hand and the creepy old bus driver says “Hey George, how’s yer mom these days?”. Bus driver digs George’s mom so he says it lustfully or something.

Panel 2. View changes and you see little George from the bus driver’s perspective. “SHUT THE FUCK UP” as he begins to wind up to throw the dinosaur.

Panel 3. The tyrannosaurus is stuck in the bus driver’s eye, tail first. He’s screaming “Gaaaaaah my dangnam eye.” George is walking towards his seat.

Panel 4. Little George sits in his seat next to his friend. “Hi Blades” he says. “Hi George, where’s your t-rex?” Blades is also holding a tyrannosaurus. “It’s in Mr. Supdup’s eye.” “God, I hate that guy.”

Panel 5. Outside of the bus view. Cop cars and an ambulance are surrounding the bus. “Me too, he had it coming.”

Panel 6. Mrs. Bentos is sitting with a lady friend in a diner. She is crying her face off and going. “Annette?! This has been about Annette the whole time? If he is alive I’m going to kill him.”

Panel 7. Mrs. Bentos’s friend reaches out her hand and puts it on Mrs. Bentos and she says “Calm down Juliette. Let’s first try to figure out what has happened to George.”

Panel 8. “I AM CALM!” Juliette Bentos says as she smashes her coffee cup to pieces. “Wait till I get my hands on Geor-WAIT TILL I GET A HOLD OF ANNETTE”

Panel 9. “What are you planning Juliette?” Lady friend is cleaning up the pieces of the broken mug. “I don’t know, but I have to find that bitch. She’ll have some explaining to do. I thought he was done with her”

Panel 10. Close up of Juliette Bentos face. She’s not crying anymore, but she looks crazy. One eye bigger than the other. That kind of thing I guess. “I wonder if she still lives at home. I’m going to head to Wyoming.”

Panel 11. Back to the school bus that is now surrounded by the cops who have their guns drawn on the bus. “Would you mind watching little George for a while? I don’t think I’ll be gone more than a week.” “Yeah sure, Julliette. That’s not a problem.

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