part 5

PART 5

Panel 1. Overhead view of the outside of the diner. Across the street you can see a bench where you can kind of make out a dude sitting on the bench with a dog at his feet. Behind him is a park where you can kind of see a couple playing Frisbee with a dog running inbetween them. A couple of parked cars in the street in between the diner and the bench where the dude is sitting. Maybe someone walking somewhere in the panel.

Panel 2. Close up view of the guy on the bench. He has a top hat on, dressed in a suit with one of them raincoat duster things on. He has blind man glasses on and a blindman stick resting on his lap. At his feet is his seeing eye dog, which is a malnourished looking black lab. Old and tired. Patches of fur missing. Head down. Behind the bench is a bush and popping up behind the bush are the heads of the couple throwing a Frisbee. The blind dude is talking “Does anybody work in this goddamn country anymore? You hear them carrying on in the park, Ladybug? Shouldn’t they be in goddamn school or something?”

Panel 3. Same view, the Frisbee comes into view, just missing the head of the blind man. One of the people in the back shouts “Oh man, go get the Frisbee, Scooter”. Ladybug’s head is up now and her tail is wagging…excited about the Frisbee. Blind dude says “Don’t you think about going anywhere, Ladybug or I will kick you in your goddamn ribs”.

Panel 4. Scoot is in the frame now, jumping over Ladybug. The blindman is holding his blindman stick like a baseball player waiting for a pitch. “goddamn hippies letting their goddamn dogs run loose and shit and piss all over this goddamn city. Someone needs to start enforcing some rules around here.”

Panel 5. The blindman has swung but missed hitting Scoot who has landed and is running out of frame after the Frisbee. The swing has caused the blindman’s hat and glasses to fall to the ground. “awww goddammit Ladybug get my goddamn glasses for me will ya.

Panel 6. Ladybug is back to looking depressed. Head down after all the Frisbee excitement. Blindman has his hat in his hand but he still doesn’t know where his glasses are which are sitting right behind Ladybug. Blindman’s now exposed eyes are normal looking. He isn’t really blind.

Panel 7. View is of the diner door now. Juliette is outside of the door. Her friend is still inside paying the bill or something I guess. She is standing there lighting a cigarette. Words from off the panel include a WHAP! Get up and find my glasses you lazy goddamn dog. Another WHAP and then a dog whimper.

Panel 8. Blindman is underneath the bench trying to find his glasses, looking kinda like the Grinch when he was slithering around stealing Christmas presents from the Who’s. lady bug is kind of behind the bench sitting and shaking. The guy in the Frisbee playing couple is standing close, behind the bush. “Excuse me sir, is everything ok? Can I help you with something?” blindman replies “Yeah you can help me by GETTING THE HELL AWAY FROM HERE.

Panel 9. The Frisbee dude is waving to his girlfriend and says “Get Scoot, let’s get the hell away from this guy. He’s out of his mind.” The blindman hand has finally found his glasses, while he is still sprawled out underneath the bench.

Panel 10. Julliette is walking past the bench. You only see her legs and her high heels and behind her, u see the blindman curled under the bench hugging Ladybug with his hand over the dog’s mouth. There’s clicks next to the heel’s or something.

Panel 11. Juliette is out of the frame and you still see the blinddude under the bench hugging Ladybug. “That’s her?!?!?! We’ve hit the jackpot Ladybug. Let’s go before she gets too far ahead.